The Art of Documentation
By Anne Thulson
"Before we hire an art teacher, please consider this possibility." I found
this note attached to a copy of the article, "The Role of the
Atelierista." I was given the article when I applied for an arts position
at the Odyssey School in Denver. The article came from one of my favorite
books, The Hundred Languages of Children, about early childhood schools in
Reggio Emilia, Italy. The Odyssey teachers were trying to decide what kind
of art approach they wanted for their school, and they thought they might
be able to use Reggio Emilia ideas to help them document learning
expeditions.
Reggio Emilia's early childhood schools are famous for their progressive
and successful approach to learning. Newsweek named Reggio among the top
ten best schools in the world in December, 1991. The Reggio schools place
great value in reflecting on children's learning. The art teacher, or
atelierista, plays an essential role in that reflection. Every Reggio
school has an atelierista, the person who runs the atelier, the school's
art studio. Students come to the atelier to work on projects that involve
clay, wire, mirrors, beautiful papers, drawing materials, and paints.
Reggio instructors see these materials as languages that children use to
construct and express many kinds of knowledge. Teachers trace the
children's discoveries through the artwork, and together with the
atelierista, document and reflect on the children's learning.
In Reggio schools, documentation is an art form in itself. Pieces of
student work are not hastily posted on bulletin boards. Instead, the
atelierista gathers student work, photographs, and accompanying texts and
arranges them with great care and artistry on beautiful black and white
display panels. These panels grace the walls and windows of the entire
school, thus surrounding the whole community with student learning.
Teachers at the Odyssey School were intrigued by this approach, and they
wondered what would happen if they crossed an atelierista with
expeditionary learning classrooms. What would that look like? As Odyssey's
atelierista, that is the question that I have been exploring for the past
year. The best way to describe an Expeditionary Learning atelierista is
that he or she is the visual voice for the school. This voice helps tell
the story of each expedition. It tells the story of children as people who
are curious, resourceful, imaginative, compassionate, and intelligent. It
also tells the story of an educational philosophy that embraces and
supports this image of the child.
This telling is done by showing. First, we show it by helping teachers and
students flesh out expeditions with high-quality projects and visual
explorations. Second, we show by documenting and displaying teacher and
student thinking.
THE STUDIO
In the first way of showing, the atelierista brainstorms with teachers on
how to use visual exercises to increase learning in an expedition. This
happens formally and informally all year long. We meet during planning
times, before and after school, and during lunch. Some teachers know
exactly what they want, some want me to come up with the ideas. It all
works as long as the expeditions are being fleshed out and the students
are working on artistic problems of design, metaphor, and media. In this
context, students do not come into the art room to produce art. They come
into the studio to work on their expeditions.
For instance, our first- and second-grade class did a year-long expedition
on gardens. Before they started, their teacher and I discussed how the
studio could support children's learning about plants and garden design.
This turned into a ten-month discussion as the expedition progressed.
During the immersion phase, students visited the Denver Botanical Gardens.
In the studio, they looked closely at plants through many sessions of
drawing and sculpting live specimens. After a student draws a petunia for
a long time, she begins to wonder about what she sees. "What are the
pointy-sticky-out things on the stems?" "What makes their color?" "Why are
some dark and some light?" Drawing and sculpting from life produces big
questions for further investigation.
I often write those questions down for teachers. They help teachers see
students' understanding and interest from a fresh perspective. For
instance, when students talked about petunias, they kept coming back to
one big idea: the varied hue and value of the petals. When the teacher has
this information she can respond to their preoccupation. Maybe they will
investigate the acidity and basicity of petal pigment. Maybe they will use
color variety as data for a mathematical investigation.
In the spring, the class designed and planted a garden. The studio
supported this in many ways. We spent most of our time creating
two-dimensional garden designs. This involved many drafts that reflected
the students' growing knowledge of scale, bird's-eye-view perspective,
water color and ink media, and Colorado plant life. The students also
designed displays to show their thinking about gardens to a larger
audience.
One group's display took the form of a handmade book called "How
Sunflowers Grow." In an early draft, the group had shown their learning in
a poster, but after a class critique, they decided to change it to a book.
First they assembled a book shaped in the silhouette of one of their
sunflower drawings. Then they worked through a series of paintings and
drawings on the development of a sunflower from seed. They wrote their
accompanying text with great care on separate papers then glued them onto
the pages. Finally they painstakingly collaged tiny magazine letters and
photos into appropriate places. "We want it to be fancy," said Brian. The
result was a very coherent, lovely book about the journey of a sunflower
made in a child's aesthetic.
The quality of this project was heightened in several ways. Their teacher,
for instance, allowed a great deal of time for it. Students spent several
sessions with me and many more sessions of work time, revision, and
critique in the classroom. The tools also enhanced their work, because
they used quality watercolor brushes and paints, artist-grade colored
pencils, and beautifully textured papers. The anticipated audience also
made the students work very hard. The stakes were high because they knew
they had to take it back to their class for a final peer critique, and
they had to present it on exhibition night. Finally, the process of
revision challenged them to do well. This irritated them, but it also
bonded us in a intense and pleasurable working relationship. They knew I
viewed what they did with serious respect, and they rose to the occasion.
We also spend time in studio making containers for student work. The
teachers and I have stressed that what we put our work in should be made
with care to honor the work itself. Sometimes a folder or binder from
Office Depot just does not do the honors well, so we make our own.
Students make beautiful books and artists' portfolios to contain carefully
chosen pieces of work. We create student presentation panels that have
clean edges, balanced compositions, pleasing color combinations, quality
student drawings, and attractive titles. We stress order and clarity, but
not at the expense of students' losing their voices. We talk about the
importance of having themselves come through the media. We use
computer-generated text, but we balance it with some handwritten text,
student-drawn images, collage, and painted titles.
DOCUMENTATION DISPLAYS
Our school days are full of profound provocations and celebrations, such
as disagreements about pond-life activity, reasons for an essay's
revision, and doubts about the theory of gravity. Part of the
atelierista's job is to collect some of these wonderful moments of
learning and display them. This involves photographing students,
transcribing their conversations, photocopying field journal entries and
drafts of student work, collecting teacher reflections, and finally
displaying this on the walls of the school, in booklets, or in slide
presentations. The audiences for these include all the protagonists of the
learning process: students, teachers, parents, and community members.
For instance, the first- and second-grade teacher told me about a crew
that had made some interesting math discoveries when they went shopping
for seeds. Some had vague ideas about taxes, but paying 7% on every dollar
was a new concept to a lot of these first and second graders. They
mastered the concept, showing many ingenious and diverse algorithms to
figure out 7% tax.
After sifting through stacks of student work and a few articles that
reflected our school's philosophy of math instruction, I put up a display
of this process in the hall. On top of off-centered squares of purple and
red tissue paper, I posted the evidence of complex learning: student
computations; sales receipts from the classroom store; photographs of
students working with money; quotations from mathematician Constance
Kamii; and comments from the first-and second-grade cashiers, such as, "We
need a price check on aisle four!" This display let other teachers,
students, and parents in on innovative and authentic learning that
otherwise might have been invisible. It served as a tool to educate
parents who might not trust or understand our math pedagogy because when
they peek into the classroom, they do not see the reassuring rows of
children silently doing worksheets.
I often see students and parents in the hall planted in front of one of
these displays with their arms folded. I hear voices from students.
"That's me counting!" "That's Yuri. Hey Yuri, there's you!" "Where's my
investigation? There's yours. Yours is long! Why is yours so long?" "Where
did they go? Could we go there?" "Are we going to dissect fish?" "Did
Jackson really draw that? That's tight!" "She put my drawing up!"
Continually changing displays tell students that the grown ups are making
a big deal about their work and ideas.
TRANSCRIPTION
In addition to the displays, we also document student learning through
transcription. Teachers, assistants, parents, and I write down things that
students say, and often, these conversations provide incredible windows
into student thinking and social learning.
Every week our staff discusses a transcribed conversation. Recently, one
of our teacher assistants shared a transcription of playground
conversations. The documentation revealed that the school lacked a
consistent authority on the playground. Different assistants had different
sets of rules, and everyone was getting frustrated and confused. Our
teacher assistants had been saying that recess was chaotic, but this
documentation helped us talk about specific goals.
Transcriptions also serve to create continuity in our school culture.
Teachers ask me to lead formal conversations among students so they can
see how teams work together or how students assimilate an assignment or
project. These conversations reveal a great deal about character issues,
false perceptions, group dynamics, and misunderstandings about content.
One teacher was disappointed with some of her fifth and sixth graders'
work on individual projects. She asked me to use studio time for students
to present their projects to other students. She thought that peer
critique would help the less motivated students become aware of the poor
quality of their finished pieces. After documenting some of these
sessions, I realized that this context of peer critique was not working
with this group at this particular time. The majority of the students did
not really listen to the presentations and often gave uninformed praise
instead of real criticism. After a particularly weak and incoherent paper
was read, these were some of the response:
"I noticed that you had good solid research."
"I noticed that since your presentation was so long that you must have had
good solid research."
"I wonder what your source was for such an in-depth timeline."
I talked to the teacher about the effect of the critique, and we were both
pretty discouraged. We started thinking about why our critique protocol
had not worked. Maybe I should have taken more leadership in the critique.
Maybe there should have been a clearer rubric to begin with. Maybe some
students spent too much time on their visual presentations and not enough
time on the content. We are still thinking and talking about this, and
next year our critique sessions will be stronger as a result.
DO IT BEAUTIFULLY
All this documentation is part of an atelierista's week. It takes up about
one quarter of my work time. Next year my goal is to spend more time with
teachers discussing documentation, because I have seen how much it helps
us deepen our reflection as a staff. Since I focus a great deal on
documentation, the school gets less studio instruction. So far the staff
and parents have valued it as much as studio instruction. As an artist and
art teacher, doing documentation is very fulfilling, because it involves
finding creative ways to communicate abstract concepts with beauty and
clarity.
This is where one year has taken us. Hopefully, Reggio's atelierista model
has helped our school to reflect deeply, create quality work, deepen
expeditions, see children more clearly, reach out to visitors and parents,
and to do it all beautifully. "Before you hire an art teacher, please
consider this possibility."
Anne Thulson is the atelierista at the Odyssey School in Denver, Colorado.
List of Work Collected for Documentation
- Copies of pages from field journals
- Drafts of finished work (especially nice to show all drafts of one piece)
- Excerpts from any kind of writing in class
- Scientific journals, fiction, research
- Math research, math work showing problem solving
- Drawings, diagrams, maps, keys
- Photographs of students working, talking, and thinking (not posing)
- Teacher reflections about the work
- Student reflections
- Parent reflections
- Artifacts from fieldwork (museum guides, rock rubbings)
- Art work
- Copies of written critique comments
- Transcriptions of:
- Teacher-led conversations
- Students' conversations while working
- Group critiques
- Morning circles
- Closing circles
Every Learning Expedition is a Story: Student Documentaries
By David Grant
The students sat in rapt attention. At this point in a documentary
project, they always do. The room was dark and the computer and television
monitors counted down in perfect symmetry: eight, seven, six, five, four,
followed by three seconds of emptiness, and then the music.
A video sequence of a medieval castle surfaced and slowly dissolved into a
slow motion glide over the medieval city the students had made. Images of
classmates, teachers, and student performances, mindfully selected and
sequenced, alternated in time to the period music they had recorded. The
narrator's words began.
"What is it like to take 200 kids, bring them back 800 years into the
past, and have them return to the present to share on stage the stories of
what they learned?"
All of the students in the room understood the question. They had worked
on it for months: unpacking the guiding questions of a learning
expedition, interviewing teachers and classmates, analyzing student
products and product descriptors, taping and reviewing hours of video, and
sorting through piles of pictures. Now for the first time they sat before
the nearly completed answer.
It was a story, ten minutes long, complete with exposition, rising action,
a climax, and a conclusion. More importantly, it was the story of their
learning. In this moment, they were telling it to themselves, describing
their own intellectual journey. It made sense. It was meaningful. It was
memorable.
Three years ago, I accepted the gifted/talented teaching position at King
Middle School in Portland, Maine. I had never expected to find myself in
such a job. I had always been suspicious of the exclusive and disconnected
G/T models I had seen. But the administration at King wanted something
different: a program that was not exclusive but still addressed the needs
of academically exceptional students, a program that moved beyond what was
currently being offered in classrooms and yet remained unambiguously
integrated with learning expeditions.
I have always believed that an excellent measure of education is the
stories our students tell about their learning: what they have learned,
how they have learned, and where they want their learning to lead them.
When I arrived at King, I found a building full of learning stories. For
the past three years, I have made these learning stories the focus of my
G/T curriculum.
Through student applications and teacher recommendations, students form
documentary teams. Around the time their classmates wrap up their
expedition projects, these students begin a new phase of work: it is their
job to tell the story. Students create learning documentaries by drawing
from student products, interviews, photographs, and video clips shot
throughout the expedition. The components of the documentaries-sounds,
visuals, text, and narration-are assembled by the students on computers
using video and sound editing software and published on videotape for the
students and their families, their teachers, our school, and our
community.
LEARNING BY TELLING
Most of our learning expeditions have been supplemented or documented in
this way over the years. Though the stories are always different, each new
project begins with the same exercise. It goes like this:
Directions:
Unscramble the words below to form two sentences. Use the space provided
to explain what these sentences mean about your learning.
the tell story. story the you You not do cannot know if
cannot have story if story. know told the you You the not
Students who have already worked with me on a project sit quietly,
knowingly, while their uninitiated peers unravel the puzzle. It does not
take them long. The meaning of the solution, however, is more elusive. The
sentences taken together form a paradox: you cannot tell the story if you
do not know the story; you cannot know the story if you have not told the
story.
This paradox provides a simple way for me to share with students one of my
core beliefs about learning: that it is a recursive process. We discover,
examine, interpret, and represent, and, from that representation, we begin
again. If we do not reach the stage of representation, especially
narrative representation where discrete content is concerned, discoveries
are often forgotten.
By making documentaries of content-rich learning expeditions, students
represent their most current comprehension of the learning expedition.
Subsequently, these representations provide the basis for new
interpretations, new syntheses of facts and concepts, and new
possibilities for representing learning. Even expedition content that
falls outside of the narrative becomes more meaningful and memorable by
association with parts of the story.
NEW AND OLD TECHNOLOGY
All of this is nothing new. The practice of learning through narrative
representation is tried and true. In the language arts classroom it is
called writing-to-learn, although it has rarely been just about writing.
In the most recent publication of Classroom Structures for Best Practices,
(Heinemann,1998) Zimelman, Daniels, and Hyde have more appropriately
renamed the writing-to-learn practice representing-to-learn. The new term
acknowledges that a variety of new media can also serve as the
end-products of learning. Although good writing will never go out of
style, the future will place equal if not greater value on sentence
fragments and word links, visual representations, and aural information.
For years, the cost of technology made in-depth student explorations in
multi-media too expensive for schools. But this is no longer the case.
Today, multi-media hardware and software come bundled with many new
computers, and virtually all computers can be upgraded to produce
high-quality multi-media work. Add video cameras (old, used, whatever) and
within a short time, students in any school can design and produce complex
multi-media products.
There is, however, one kind of older technology that is essential:
flexible schedules. At King, for example, we rearrange class schedules,
revise expectations and assignments, and make-up work. This flexibility is
what makes it possible for our documentaries to reflect learning in an
in-depth, thoughtful way.
Naturally, students are not always thinking about these outcomes when they
apply to participate in an expedition documentary. They want to make a
movie. They want to work with cool equipment. They want to make something
that a lot of people will see. They want to make something that looks like
the videos they buy. Whatever their reasons, they want to make something
that feels real and useful. Real work, useful work: these are the forces
that motivate students to go on learning expeditions in the first place.
During expeditions, I ask students to take a journey, to participate in
something that they will be able to tell stories about in the end. For
both my students and myself, making expeditionary documentaries has
increased opportunities to meaningfully represent our most current
learning and (for me) teaching practices. Once we've embodied the stories
and watched them, we may see things we wish we had changed or could do
differently. But there is always the next time, and the time after that,
and the time after that.
David Grant is the gifted/talented teacher at King Middle School in
Portland, Maine.
Learning Stories On Line
By Meg Campbell and William Duke
This summer twenty-two Expeditionary Learning Outward Bound educators from
fifteen schools effectively created a dot.com web publishing studio in the
classrooms, hallways, meeting areas, and playground of the Odyssey School
in Denver. Like any other dot.com start-up, folks worked from early
morning to late at night to meet an ambitious deadline: documenting a
learning expedition on a web site within nine days.
Why would Expeditionary Learning Outward Bound offer a web publishing
course? What does web publishing have to do with our design? The answer is
simple: the technology of web publishing offers an excellent way to
document and reflect on student learning.
This potential becomes clear when you think of the difference between a
photocopied pamphlet that describes a school, and a web site that offers
visual images, sound, and unlimited opportunities to capture learning.
Documenting expeditions on-line opens the door to the public and tells
them what learning looks like in a school. How does this school portray
learning? Is it thoughtful? Is it reflective? Has the community placed
student learning at the center of their web site and their school?
Yet when we started our web publishing institute, we had no templates to
follow. We could not show teachers existing web sites that documented
learning expeditions in the way we were envisioning. We had to create them
ourselves.
THE ARCHITECTURE OF A SITE
The institute began with an exploration of the nationally renowned Denver
Central Library. Designed by architect Michael Graves, the library
provided an excellent metaphor for a web site. A person can enter the
library with the purpose of obtaining information and find it easily, and
because the library organizes information both horizontally and
vertically, it encourages serendipitous learning. People can find
treasures they did not expect to discover. All of this is true of a good
web site as well.
Wandering around the library helped the teachers ground the abstract
concept of a web site in something concrete. This was especially useful,
since only half of the group had ever posted a web page before. Other
folks had designed their school's web site, but were new to certain
programs or the experience of documenting a learning expedition. By the
end of the first day, all of the participants had put up a simple web
page. The remainder of the course was designed as a flexible studio with
tutorials offered as needed on topics from Photoshop and Dreamweaver to
how to infuse design principles into web sites.
WEB SITE AS PORTFOLIO
Once the participants began to master the technology of web sites, they
turned their attention to the content. Often, the first inclination when
producing a web site is to throw everything on the site at once. While the
technology can handle a great deal of material, visitors still need
carefully selected and well organized information. At the institute, we
discovered that the learning expedition offers an excellent framework for
designing a site. The categories of guiding questions, learning goals,
fieldwork, and culminating projects steer people to the material they need
and offer a good picture of what students experience on an expedition.
As the teachers began pulling together the information for their sites,
they discovered that the process of designing a web site is similar to
creating a portfolio of student learning. They had to carefully choose the
pieces of student work, the projects, and the drafts that would tell the
story of the expedition most powerfully. As with a portfolio, the act of
selection became an opportunity for reflection.
In the culture of web publishing, there is a growing tendency toward
glitzy sites, bright banner ads, and snazzy graphics. The teachers at our
institute never lost site of the primary importance of rich content. The
teachers continually asked themselves if their web sites focused on
student learning. They recognized that schools have a lot of information
to communicate-upcoming events, scheduling changes, and school lunches-but
these details do not need to be the core of the site. The core can and
should be student learning. Vic Yonash, a teacher at Winnequah Middle
School in Monona, Wisconsin, said, "We are under a lot of pressure now
from our principal and the public to put up a web site. We came focused on
the wheels of the race car. You made us lift up the hood and focus on the
design of our engine."
BRINGING HOME A NEWBORN
The institute culminated with a presentation of the new web sites.
Participants also shared some of the discoveries they had made during the
week. They had learned practical skills, like understanding software
programs and using technical tricks, but on a deeper level, they were
empowered by the individual and group learning. They got inspiration from
their colleagues through guided critique sessions. After seeing one of the
emerging sites, one teacher said, "I wish I had taken photographs of
drafts of work. I'll do that next time because I can see that it is a
powerful form of documentation."
Anne Thulson, a teacher at the Odyssey School, said she had not
experienced such a steep learning curve since she brought her newborn home
from the hospital. She explained that when she went jogging every morning,
she used to sustain her pace by counting each block she passed. When she
jogged during the institute, she started imagining herself cell padding, a
process she learned making a template on Dreamweaver. This little change
in a daily habit, she said, told her that she had made a significant shift
in the way she thought about web sites.
UNDER CONSTRUCTION
The work the teachers started at the institute is still very much
underway. The teachers left Denver committed to critiquing each other's
work and sharing ideas and problem-solving via our list serve. We created
a schedule for ongoing review of each other's web sites throughout the
year. It is also our hope to be able to reconvene the group this winter to
work on more advanced tools and to review the next expedition they have
committed to web publishing this fall.
There is an ethic of generosity in cyberspace. By sharing their learning
on-line, the teachers at the institute have provided a great service to
educators. Expeditionary learning teachers in faraway cities can learn
from their colleagues' experience. They can benefit from the links, books,
experts, and projects that these teachers have documented on their web
sites. Just like a well-designed library, these sites are now open to all
interested learners.
Meg Campbell is the former executive director of Expeditionary Learning
Outward Bound.
William Duke is a poet and new media consultant who co-teaches the Poetry
Summit and the Web Publishing Institute.
DOCUMENTING LEARNING EXPEDITIONS ON LINE
Teachers created or redesigned the following web sites at the
Expeditionary Learning Outward Bound Web Publishing Institute.
Odyssey School, Denver, CO:
http://www.lightlink.com/elobweb/thulson
Offers an imaginative template for teachers to document learning
expeditions.
Central High School, Dubuque, IA:
http://www.lightlink.com/elobweb/stevens/map/index.htm
Includes work from a multi-year learning expedition on designing and
maintaining a school garden. Site also has a student-developed plant
database.
Anser Charter School, Boise, ID:
http://www.anser-charter-school.org
Shows how publisher redesigned web site to infuse Expeditionary Learning
design, including weekly email to parents to inform them of progress of
learning expeditions.
Umonhon Nation, Macy, NE:
http://www.esu1.k12.ne.us/~macywww/home.htm
Documents the "Last Successful Buffalo Hunt" learning expedition completed
by high school students at this Native American school.
Winnequah Middle School, Monona, WI:
http://www.mononagrove.org/winnequah
Illustrates how publisher infused the Expeditionary Learning design into
site.
Oak Grove Elementary, North Little Rock, AR:
http://www.lightlink.com/elobweb/dudeck
Documents the "Nifty Fifty" fifth-grade learning expedition.
Middle River Middle School, Baltimore, MD:
http://www.lightlink.com/elobweb/brillante/big/homepage/index.htm
Highlights student work and dialogue, and documents one seventh-grade
expedition and one multi-grade summer expedition.
Alamo Achievement Center, San Antonio, TX:
http://www.lightlink.com/elobweb/carty/aachome.html
Documents learning expeditions, including a Multi Media expedition
featuring student-produced commercials, slide shows, and videos.
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